The ‘modesty clothing’ is amusing in how far down it DOESNT go, like a deliberately skimpy spa robe. Kinda underscores the idea it’s meant to come off! Also, the scandalous male nipple slip! Elzy looks ENTIRELY too eager for this, and I dunno whether he’s more interested in Kaylin or Nyna at this point.

Given everything else that’s happened this chapter, it’s funny to think a reader might not get what is being implied here by asking if Nyna wants to join. It’s been 16 pages or so since the idea of sex at the dance was mentioned, along with earlier references sprinkled throughout about dancing naked under the moonlight. I imagine it will be a fun challenge to find creative environmental options for ‘convenient’ censorship, without making it look like the characters are actually hiding themselves. Hopefully it doesnt get TOO derailed by meeting Lyrestra, if that happens!

Something about Elzy’s pose made it feel off, but I can’t point to why. Maybe I”m getting thrown off by how his long hair obscures his center, but it almost looked like his neck and collarbone were too far apart, or not aligned right. I’m sure work was done to ensure it IS right, but for whatever reason something about the way he’s turned is messing with my eyes @.@