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Nyna’s forward leaning pose looking up at Yunn is really good – definitely a catlike sort of judging stare. And the way she suddenly just turns and leaves is perfect; mission accomplished, you’re boring now. She probably even heard what Elzy says about her butt, and is grinning about having gotten a reaction from him. Very much a great character page for her!

One question my OCD mind wants to ask: what happened to the door behind Yunn? Elzy is still laying ‘straight’ in the hallway (judging from the orientation of the floor boards) with his head toward where Yunn entered in the previous comic through a door – but behind Yunn in those bottom panels the walls look unbroken. I’d thought she could have moved to Elzy’s side, but the floor is still horizontal boards ‘towards’ her and his head pose looks like he is looking ‘forward’ up at her so it doesnt look like that. Realistically it doesn’t matter, but it caught my attention :p

I was wondering if anyone would even notice that XD
The door is missing. While I was working on it, I finished up my stream and looked over the page and thought – “oh… the door should be there… will anyone even notice, or will anyone even say anything?” I was getting ready to run my D&D game so I decided to leave it as it was and only fix it if someone mentioned it, or wait till I have time the extra time to do so. XD Shouldnt take long for me to fix either way and making time is the best way to get time.

I could see Kaylin’s derriere being described as silk pillow… but Nyna’s frame seems more “lithe”/”wiry”. Unless you’re talking about those pillows that are used solely for decoration and are completely uncomfortable to actually lean against…

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