Wake up sleepy heads, time to start an adventure!
Artificial Incident
Wake up sleepy heads, time to start an adventure!
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Those Big ears aren’t for show after all 😀
I like Kaylin’s choice of sleepwear.
yes me too, i wonder where i could get some arm bands like that
yeah. in the nude.
Video game character hair here, people. Relm’s hair is a mess, while Kaylin’s was all neat after waking up.
Elves are just naturally better at managing their hair, and other such stuff, they don’t get groggy or that cloudy stuff in their eyes in the morning either. Plus a player character might have the higher quality shampoo and conditioner in her inventory….
Let me just ask: how long is your hair?
I have it short right now, but I had it down past my shoulders for a few years, it tangled way too easily. Probably because I don’t come from any mystical elvish bloodlines….
Muahaha, mine is 1/3 of the way down my back, no tangles!
Damn you, I will have my revenge for this indignity…that…wait, is this really a one up type situation…?
Anyway, yeah mine would be tangled anytime I didn’t have something in it, water, gells/sprays, a comb, or if anybody looked at it too hard.
Or a magickal item that keeps her hair nice and keeps her clean and smelling nice even after getting thrown in a garbage pit (I know I misquoted it, but cookies for anyone who still gets the reference)
Well, yes. She was, after all, a video game character…
Double check 2nd panel her hair while better was also a bit messy and oily
Huh, those gloves are new. On a seperate note I have enjoyed the story so far, I do have one minor criticism and that is that sometimes the necks are a little too long and thin. Hardly dealbreaking but it is sometimes distracting.
If you mean on this page, her hair is in front of it.
Cant say this page has any examples. Usually I notice it the character is face on to us.
That just goes to show how big their chests are, not how thin their necks are, it’s about perspective. Those necks are just too far away.
I’ll try to keep em consistent and properly sized. I’ll have to go back and check if any are off too much and fix. Any pages where it’s really obvious?
There are a couple on p15 of this chapter and panel 4 of p17 is a little noticeable. Though I would advise not getting too bogged down in fixing things like that I’ve heard it can be a real timesink.
If it is something I can do relatively easily I am more than happy to improve the quality of the comic! Thank you for taking your time to let me know.
Your welcome.